Name : Jung Jaehoon
Date : 07. 07. 10
First draft
The Various Type of PC
Nowadays PC has become part of our life. We can see PC everywhere and have to use it when we work. Sometimes you can a person who has lots of PC. We cannot imagine modern life without PC. However, PC is classified by types.
First of all, a desktop was the most frequently used PC. As the name shows us, buying a desktop means that people who buy a desktop use it on the desk. Furthermore, a desktop cannot work itself, it needs many devices. At least you have to buy a monitor, a keyboard and a mouse when you buy a desktop. However, if you had a huge knowledge of PC, buying the desktop is a best choice. Since you can upgrade it oneself.
On the other hand, the most well-known PC is a laptop. A laptop is a PC that includes every device in the one stuff. Also the laptop is not so complicate to use. Then, the laptop has own battery, keyboard and monitor. You do not need to buy other devices, just buy only one. Furthermore, it is not heavy unlike the desktop and easy to use.
In addition, we can see a tablet. We cannot find many differences between a laptop and a tablet. They do not need other devices, have their own power and are not heavy. However, you can find out a difference in the monitor consisted of the touch panel compared to other types of PC. You can control everything with the touch panel when you use a tablet. Furthermore, a tablet is lighter than a laptop. As a tablet has only the touch panel as an input device, adjusting to a tablet is quite difficult.
There are three types of PC. Those are called a desktop, a laptop and a tablet. A desktop is powerful but we cannot use it on the road. Then, the most famous PC is a laptop because of portability and convenience. In addition, there is a tablet which can use it everywhere and have the touch panel. Now you can figure out what kind of PC people have.
I'm very interested in computer.
ReplyDeleteSo, your essay is very interesting to me.
Your article has done a good classification about computer.
And, I have an idea about your essay
How about make examples in each paragraph?
For example, When I was a child, Apple desktop computer was very famous.
i-pad is a typical example of tablet computer.
Anyway, your essay is very good.
Have a good time :)
You explained the differences about laptop and tablet, which is very easy to understand.
ReplyDeleteHowever, your definition of tablet is having touchscreen, and i can't fully understand it since that sentence conveys meaning that only attaching touchscreen to laptop is tablet. There should be more chracteristics of tablet.
I don't know well about computer but I can learn from your essay.
ReplyDeleteAs professor mentioned yesterday, your hook is not attractive enough. How about trying something more interesting. And the desription about tablet is not enough. And cohesive and transition should be checked again.^^