200901747 Shin Myungchul Second Essay Second Draft.

A Guide to Happiness

200901747 Shin Myungchul

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Second Draft

Happiness, actually, is everywhere. But each person finds it in different places, places that never knew it could be. For me, I find my happiness internally. I think happiness is inside me, so there is no reason to find it elsewhere. But, of course, there are some people who are in a deep despair, claiming that no happiness is left for them, and I feel great pity for them. What they just have to know is that the happiness is a thing like air. It never runs out. One never knows that it is all around, but once take a closer look, it can be easily found. Finding Happiness is very important. If one realises that they have happiness, their life will be much better and peaceful.

Physical health is very important for happiness. Since person's main power is healthiness, having a good physical condition is crucial for happiness. Money, power, and all the cause of happiness will be worthless if a person has not good health. As there is old saying: A sound mind in a sound body, keeping good condition should always be a top priority and other things subordinate.

Emotional condition, as well as physical condition, is also important. Depressed thought cannot derive happiness at all. Flaws in mental well being can produce some dire results such as depression, lack of vitality and even tragic suicide. Thus, having optimism is very important.

Someone who keeps thinking in a hopeful way has no option but to succeed.

Finally, last but not least, psychological condition can also be a main cause of happiness.

One example is love. Person who is in deep love can be promisingly happy. Also, keeping faith in religion can also make the believer happy. Being totally into something can make a person focuses on one's interest, and can allow no the room for hopelessness to come in.

To summarise, none of these three factors above can be excluded to real happiness. A trio of physical health, emotional health and psychological health is crucial for finding happiness. In order to keep all these things at once, one should concentrate on these things, not material and earthly things such as fortune or properties. Having all of these factors can obviously lead one to the world full of happiness.