Joontae Kim
Assignment No.2 - 6.30
Deadly Wind that Whirls Around
Death toll of 695, over 2000 injuries, and property damage of over 16.5
million dollars. It is the statistics that indicates the devasting aftermath of the deadliest
tornado that broke out in Mussouri, Illinois and Indiana called 'The Tri State Tornado'.
Although this kind of violent tornado only count for 2% of all tornadoes, we should
be aware of what effects can a tornado bring about and learn about a way to prepare
for it. A tornado, a funnel-shaped whirling wind accompanied by the thunderstorm
when hot and cold air are mixed, can bring about phsycial and psychological
damage on human being, and severe property damages.
One of the major effects of the tornadoes is the physical effects on us, the
human beings. As I have mentioned above, the most violent tornadoes brings about
hundreds and thousands of deaths and injuries. Different from what people normally
would imagine, the flying debris is accountable for most deaths and injuries. The wind
force of a tornado is so powerful that it can tear apart the roofing materials, parts of
cars and other heavy objects. The deaths and severe injuries occur when people are hit
by these debris carried out by the tornadoes. For instance, an outbreak of tornado in
Minnesota, USA lifted up a railroad coach that weighs 88 ton and threw it away for
almost 30 meters. How would we be able to survive from debris that flys through a
wind force so strong as above incident?
Also, there is a long-lasting psychological effect on people. Those who were
fortunate enough to survive from severe tornado still may suffer from what is called as
post traumatic stress disorder. It is a disorder that develops when we have experienced
very traumatic events such as war, plane crash, or natural calamities such as an
earthquake, a tornado, and a hurricane. Even with proper treatment, we may
frequently recollect the moment we barely survived the tornado, avoid the situation
such as going out on a very windy day that reminds us of the incident, and feel
extremely anxious for the rest of our lives.
Last but not least, there is property damage. The strong wind force of tornado
completely destructs the whole area that is affected by it. Although weak tornadoes
may bring about minor damages such as broken window, partial destruction of house,
and others, the most violent tornades can even destruct the structure of buildings that
are over 100 meters tall. In case of the widest tornado that occured recently in Hallam,
Nebraska a record high 4 km wide tornado destructed 95% of all houses and buildings
that was located in the area. Even though it was in a rural area, it resulted in property
damage of 175 million dollars. Also, property damage includes the effort we must put
into restore the damages that has been done. It takes months and months to rebuild the
houses and buildings, restore the infrastructure such as water supply, electricity, and
traffic and others. Not only the contractors for the restoration work but also residents
of the area puts countless hours into the rebuilding of the area.
A tornado is weather phenomenon that can bring about devasting results:
physical effect such as deaths and severe injuries, long-lasting psychological effect
such as post traumatic stress disorder, and enormous damage on personal property and
social infrastructure as well. Since it is a natural phenomenon, we are not able to
prevent it in the first place. I, however, believe that we can minimize the death tolls
and injuries by proceeding a campaign on tornades including information such as
what are the indicators of upcoming tornado, how to react to it, where is the nearest
emergency shelter, and others.
After reading your essay, I recalled my Hurricane Experience 10 years ago. It was very terrible hurricane. I can get a lot of information about Tornado. Your essay is strong.
ReplyDeleteI think your description is logical.
Moreover I like your expression "I, however, believe that we can minimize the death tolls and injuries by proceeding a campaign on tornades including information"
It is very instructive.
I wonder that you had experienced Tornado.
If you talk about your experiences about Tornado, It would have been better.
Anyway, Good Luck :)
I like the hook. It mentions about the precise tolls of aftermath. So it is much easier to convince people of the threat of tornado.
ReplyDeleteYour main point is the devastating effects of tornado.
But the sentece 'How would we be able to survive from debris that flys through a wind force so strong as above incident?' is somewhat needs to be improved, since there is no answer from the question.
Sangsik Min - Thanks for your comment. Actually, I have personal experience about tornado. I might figure out way to include it on my 2nd draft.
ReplyDeleteMyungchul Shin - Yes. Come to think about it, I might change the order of sentences so that the question would not be left out alone. Thanks for your remark.